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 COURSE FIVE: HORROR
Author: Wyatt Earp 
Date:   05-26-12 08:34

In Wessex Falls they had a saying: "When there is a red moon before snowfall, beware." Of course it was a very old saying and no one knew where it came from or why. Old man Bernard Everard had heard it from his pop, and his gramps, but those were old timers and things were very different in the old days. Hell, when it starting snowing for the winter they were holed up in Everard Hollow and didn't come down until thaw. That was just the way of it. So who knows what folks got up to isolated on their farms during the winter a hundred years ago? Maybe it was like a werewolf thing only folks were going stir crazy? Of course who ever even heard of a red moon? Bernard had seen it yellow or even blue once, but never red.

That was until tonight. Tonight he was out on Lake Mekwek ice fishing. This year in Wessex Falls it had been colder than a witch's tit, and tonight was no exception. The ice was good and thick, and it was so cold that Bernard decided to drive his truck out on the ice to his fishing cabin instead of walk. In fact it was so cold that once he was out on the ice he realized he was the only one. Even with their little shacks and heaters it seemed like no one wanted to spend a night out on the lake.

"Chicken flatlanders," grunted Bernard, even though he knew full well that his neighbors and fellow fisherman were all natives, but Bernard liked to blame everything on flatlanders with their SUVs and their propensity for 'improving' things.

The ice was at least 8 inches, and the mercury read 15 below, and it was probably even colder if you counted the wind chill factor. Before Bernard entered his shack he looked up at the sky. It was always the clearest nights that were the coldest and tonight was no exception. On top of that it was a full moon and she was as big as a pie plate up there in the sky, and red. Really red. Bernard hadn't heard that old saying in years, most of the old timers that remembered being dead and in their graves, but now it came to mind. Beware of what though? It was cold, that was for sure, but it never snowed when it was this cold. Off the ice the landscape around though was covered in a thick blanket of the white stuff. It was just like when Bernard was a kid, not like these modern wishy washy winters since the global warming or whatever it was.

Bernard ducked into his shack, got his heater going, and baited his Tip-up, and got it set in place. Then he sat down on his camp stool to wait, a nice flask of brandy in his mittened hand to help pass the time. It was a few minutes past midnight when the ice started creaking around Bernard. At first he was dozing lightly and he didn't notice, but as his consciousness returned to him, he found himself thinking it must be the spring thaw. But that was only until the last shreds of sleep slipped away from his mind. Then he sat up bolt upright in alarm. Why was the ice cracking? It was eight inches thick and the mercury still read in the low teens. Spring was still months away. Even if it suddenly warmed up twenty and more degrees it would take a lot longer for the ice to melt on the surface of the cold lake. Bernard stepped outside.

The moon was an angry red eye glowering at him from the sky, and all around Bernard could hear the ice cracking, louder and louder. He fumbled in his pocket for this truck keys. He would need to get it off the ice. Even if it was freezing something was going on and the ice was going. Already he could see cracks growing with alarming speed closer to the middle of the lake, racing towards him, exploding like gunshots in the woods. He paused for just a second to take in the awful scene, his heart a hammer in his chest, his breath coming in short gulps as the panic started to really hit him. None of it made sense his mind protested but his senses screamed at him to run. He turned to make the dash for the truck. What he saw next made even less sense than the cracking ice. A huge tentacle, thicker than a tree trunk, pushed up a slab of ice, than another and another, and with these great suckered arms something, something monstrous and huge, grabbed Bernard's truck and pulled it under the ice and the water.

Yelping in fear Bernard broke and ran for the shore.

He didn't make it. Before he'd gone a yard the tentacles were back, breaking through the ice all around him. The first wrapped around his ankle, starting to drag him. He tried to break free, clawing futilely with fingers muzzled in mittens, desperately wishing he hadn't left his axe back in the shack, but the thing was powerful and he was pulled off his feet and dragged over the ice, which tore through his down parka like shards of glass. Bernard started yelling, his arms flailing around him, but there was no one to hear him except the kraken under the ice. As it pulled him under the last thing Bernard ever saw was the red moon over Wessex Falls.

A few hours later the sky had clouded over and the snow began to fall, covering up all traces of Bernard. In the morning folks would marvel at the state of the lake, but nature could be fickle, everyone in New England knew that. In the spring they would find Bernard's truck a mile away in the Wapek river.



 Topics Author  Date
 IWPH Writer Stadium  Pandemonium  05-23-12 08:50 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-25-12 09:23 
  Pandemonium Walks Upon the Scene  Pandemonium  05-25-12 09:23 
  RE: Pandemonium Walks Upon the Scene  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 09:54 
  The Secret Ingredient  Katheryn dEllesmera  05-25-12 09:57 
  RE: Pandemonium Walks Upon the Scene  J Sprocket Stemwinder  05-25-12 10:05 
  Wyatt Earp, Iron Writer Pan Historia, Master of Westerns  Wyatt Earp  05-25-12 10:05 
  RE: The Secret Ingredient  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 10:06 
  A little intro ...pirate style!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 10:12 
  The Challenger ... Devlin!  Devlin  05-25-12 10:25 
  Welcome one, welcome all!  Joan  05-25-12 10:26 
  Last Minute Rule Change!  Pandemonium  05-25-12 10:31 
  COURSE ONE:HISTORICAL WESTERN  Wyatt Earp  05-25-12 10:48 
  Let it Snow and Ohh look!  Joan  05-25-12 11:07 
  Some refreshment while we wait?  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 11:26 
  Response to the judges  Devlin  05-25-12 11:34 
  RE: Some refreshment while we wait?  J Sprocket Stemwinder  05-25-12 11:48 
  RE: Some refreshment while we wait?  Katheryn dEllesmera  05-25-12 11:58 
  JS! I"m likin' the sound o' that!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 12:08 
  Of Course There MUST beSnow!  J Sprocket Stemwinder  05-25-12 12:16 
  New friends in the stands too!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 12:30 
  RE: New friends in the stands too!  Katheryn dEllesmera  05-25-12 12:41 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-25-12 12:41 
  COURSE ONE: HISTORY! (WWII)  Devlin  05-25-12 12:45 
  where is the popcorn?  Clio  05-25-12 12:46 
  RE: Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-25-12 12:50 
  Snacks and Sky  Joan  05-25-12 12:54 
  RE: New friends in the stands too!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 12:56 
  Commercial break between rounds!  Devlin  05-25-12 12:58 
  RE: Commercial break between rounds!  Katheryn dEllesmera  05-25-12 13:09 
  Sponsors? Aye!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 13:13 
  A Little Curious Countess  Suzanne de Vertus  05-25-12 13:15 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-25-12 13:16 
  Some Support  Joan  05-25-12 13:35 
  The Pin, The pin on the badge!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 13:43 
  Summertime Movies!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 13:57 
  Sitting in the stands...shaking my head!  Sesen  05-25-12 14:20 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-25-12 14:57 
  RE: Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Clementine Proulx  05-25-12 15:13 
  Goodbye...For now!  Joan  05-25-12 15:20 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-25-12 15:25 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-25-12 15:36 
  COURSE TWO: FANTASY STEAMPUNK  Wyatt Earp  05-25-12 15:46 
  Old doesn't mean mature  Dulcinea  05-25-12 15:49 
  Cheers and no jeers...  Clio  05-25-12 15:51 
  Drafted  Isabella Marie  05-25-12 16:13 
  RE: COURSE ONE: HISTORY! (WWII)  Alexei Nikolaevich  05-25-12 16:27 
  Hours tick by.....  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 16:38 
  RE: Hours tick by.....  Katheryn dEllesmera  05-25-12 16:51 
  COURSE THREE: ROMANCE  Wyatt Earp  05-25-12 16:58 
  Interviewing the Competitors!  Isabella Marie  05-25-12 17:24 
  RE: COURSE THREE: ROMANCE  Clementine Proulx  05-25-12 17:26 
  COURSE TWO: DARK URBAN FANTASY  Devlin  05-25-12 17:26 
  The Girls Spot Miss Clio  Big Ben  05-25-12 17:36 
  *Applause*  Sabrina Banner  05-25-12 18:00 
  Being found by friends  Clio  05-25-12 18:04 
  RE: Being found by friends  Evaline Boulanger  05-25-12 18:15 
  Half-starved judges!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 18:19 
  Food is on the way  J Sprocket Stemwinder  05-25-12 18:50 
  Sweet Treats  Phyllida  05-25-12 19:04 
  RE: Sweet Treats  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 19:17 
  RE: Sweet Treats  Phyllida  05-25-12 19:45 
  So quiet!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 19:48 
  RE: Sweet Treats  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 19:52 
  COURSE FOUR: SCIENCE FICTION  Wyatt Earp  05-25-12 20:11 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Taniko  05-25-12 20:12 
  Knackered  Wyatt Earp  05-25-12 20:14 
  Lettin' the Pearl sing us a lullaby...  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-25-12 21:08 
  Plan and What happened  Dr Armageddon Endikut  05-25-12 21:27 
  RE: Plan and What happened  Devlin  05-25-12 21:31 
  Wow  Dulcinea  05-25-12 21:33 
  9 hours  Dr Armageddon Endikut  05-25-12 21:41 
  COURSE THREE: CONTEMPORARY  Devlin  05-25-12 21:48 
  RE: Wow  Suzanne de Vertus  05-26-12 01:25 
  What Happened So Far  Joan  05-26-12 02:38 
  COURSE FOUR: ROMANCE  Devlin  05-26-12 03:06 
  Two to Go!  Joan  05-26-12 03:28 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-26-12 04:59 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-26-12 05:00 
  Shaking herself awake  Clio  05-26-12 05:17 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-26-12 05:40 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-26-12 05:41 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-26-12 05:42 
  Also Awakening This Pleasant Morn  Big Ben  05-26-12 06:40 
  Back to Judging  Katheryn dEllesmera  05-26-12 07:26 
  COURSE FIVE: SCIENCE FICTION  Devlin  05-26-12 07:36 
  One to Go!  Joan  05-26-12 07:47 
  Fair mornin' to Pan Historia  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-26-12 07:48 
  An Invitation  Clio  05-26-12 07:51 
  Final comments  Devlin  05-26-12 07:54 
  Most exciting - and what is to come!  Sesen  05-26-12 08:23 
  COURSE FIVE: HORROR  Wyatt Earp  05-26-12 08:34 
  The End (almost)  Joan  05-26-12 08:39 
  RE: The End (almost)  Wyatt Earp  05-26-12 08:45 
  Judging!  Pandemonium  05-26-12 08:47 
  Round of applause, indeed!  Captn Jack Sparrow  05-26-12 08:57 
  Stick a fork in it  Dulcinea  05-26-12 09:10 
  The Judges Have Spoke: And the Winner of Pan Historia's First Iron Writer Challenge Match Is:::  Pandemonium  05-26-12 11:17 
  RE:Winner of Pan Historia's First Iron Writer Challenge Match  Veronica Dorsey  05-26-12 11:43 
  RE: The Judges Have Spoke: And the Winner of Pan Historia's First Iron Writer Challenge Match Is:::  Andrea Hawthorn  05-26-12 12:05 
  RE:Winner of Pan Historia's First Iron Writer Challenge Match  Suzanne de Vertus  05-26-12 12:16 
  Congratulations  Clio  05-26-12 14:06 
  RE:Winner of Pan Historia's First Iron Writer Challenge Match  Taniko  05-26-12 15:43 
  Many thanks to one and all!  Devlin  05-27-12 14:04 
  Present at the IWPH Writer Stadium  Sky  05-28-12 05:16 
  IWPH Writer Stadium: Getting Ready For The Second Challenge  Elizabeth deLisle  06-01-12 06:55 
  Offering the concessions  Clio  06-01-12 08:32 
  RE: Offering the concessions  Wyatt Earp  06-01-12 12:41 
  RE: Offering the concessions  Sky  06-01-12 15:09 
  RE: Offering the concessions  Calliope  06-01-12 15:09 
  For Calliope and a question for anyone  Clio  06-01-12 15:24 
  Tea and a good seat  Sarah Hastings  06-01-12 15:29 
  When the Devil is too busy...  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-01-12 15:30 
  Pandemonium Walks Upon the Scene  Pandemonium  06-01-12 15:52 
  RE: When the Devil is too busy...  Sky  06-01-12 16:00 
  Today's Secret Ingredient is....  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-01-12 16:02 
  RE: Today's Secret Ingredient is....  Wyatt Earp  06-01-12 16:03 
  RE: Today's Secret Ingredient is....  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-01-12 16:10 
  Andr...errr Adrasteia Arrives  Andrea Hawthorn  06-01-12 16:22 
  RE: Today's Secret Ingredient is....  Devlin  06-01-12 16:30 
  COURSE ONE:HISTORICAL WESTERN  Wyatt Earp  06-01-12 16:34 
  Sideline commentary  Devlin  06-01-12 16:50 
  Sitting down by Devlin  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-01-12 16:55 
  Sideline commentary  Devlin  06-01-12 17:03 
  RE: Sideline commentary  Sarah Hastings  06-01-12 17:08 
  More commentary  Clio  06-01-12 17:27 
  Army Called  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-01-12 17:36 
  RE: Army Called  Wyatt Earp  06-01-12 17:51 
  COURSE TWO: CONTEMPORARY  Wyatt Earp  06-01-12 17:57 
  Rivited  Calliope  06-01-12 18:08 
  A little monkey business....  Sky  06-01-12 18:14 
  Course #1: History/War (American Civil War & WWI) Scratches  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-01-12 18:19 
  Sampling the Courses  Andrea Hawthorn  06-01-12 19:12 
  RE: Sideline commentary  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-01-12 19:13 
  Course #2 Fantasy: A Devil of a Game  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-01-12 19:31 
  Taking a Seat  Azazel  06-01-12 19:49 
  Invitation Answered  Andrea Hawthorn  06-01-12 20:13 
  Tip of the Hat  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-01-12 20:48 
  Acknowlegement  Azazel  06-01-12 21:11 
  Course #3 Fanfic/Scifi Doctor Who Adventures of the 13th Doctor: Scratches on the Walls  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-01-12 22:09 
  Master  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-01-12 22:18 
  At the Games  Tank Girl  06-01-12 22:55 
  Considering the Courses Offered So Far  Elizabeth deLisle  06-02-12 00:13 
  RE: Considering the Courses Offered So Far  Phyllida  06-02-12 01:02 
  RE: Considering the Courses Offered So Far  Elizabeth deLisle  06-02-12 01:07 
  A Delayed Welcome  Joan  06-02-12 02:03 
  What Happened So Far  Joan  06-02-12 02:56 
  caught up and waiting  Clio  06-02-12 07:04 
  Mug of Joe in Hand...  Wyatt Earp  06-02-12 08:17 
  Entering the Stadium...  J Sprocket Stemwinder  06-02-12 08:48 
  RE: What Happened So Far  Captain StarCastle  06-02-12 08:50 
  COURSE THREE: HORROR  Wyatt Earp  06-02-12 09:22 
  RE: COURSE THREE: HORROR  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-02-12 09:31 
  Course 4: Contemporary: It’s Only a Scratch!  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-02-12 09:36 
  COURSE FOUR: ROMANTIC FANTASY  Wyatt Earp  06-02-12 10:41 
  Commentary  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-02-12 11:22 
  COURSE FIVE: SCIENCE FICTION  Wyatt Earp  06-02-12 11:41 
  More Courses Served  Andrea Hawthorn  06-02-12 11:41 
  Course 5: Horror/Suspense: Let me see your hand.  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-02-12 12:43 
  The Time of Judgement is at Hand!  Pandemonium  06-02-12 12:51 
  Sheriff.  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-02-12 12:54 
  Placing Her Vote  Andrea Hawthorn  06-02-12 14:51 
  Plating the Courses  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-02-12 19:04 
  The Judges Deliberate Until Morning  Andrea Hawthorn  06-02-12 19:12 
  Morning  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-02-12 20:07 
  And the Winner Is...  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-03-12 01:31 
  I Want to Thank Dr Endikut!  Wyatt Earp  06-03-12 05:54 
  Bandages for all fingertips  Clio  06-03-12 06:00 
  Good Job Sheriff  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-03-12 07:26 
  Well Done Iron Guys!  Captain StarCastle  06-03-12 08:32 
  Thank you  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-03-12 14:18 
  RE: Thank you  Wyatt Earp  06-03-12 18:21 
  Introducing Sarah Hasting,the challenger  Sarah Hastings  06-15-12 17:17 
  Ooo Goody!  Uncle Sutekh  06-15-12 17:34 
  Good Morning, Pan and Welcome to Another Iron Writer!  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-16-12 06:26 
  From Zone: History  Clio  06-16-12 06:50 
  Oy Yay! I'm not late then  Jessie Dodd  06-16-12 07:52 
  Is Magic Allowed In This?  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 08:15 
  ~::~ Midnight People - Official Sponser of Iron Writer Pan Historia: Sarah Hastings V. Devlin ~::~  Gabriel Oak  06-16-12 08:16 
  CONTESTANTS PLEASE READ:  Pandemonium  06-16-12 08:36 
  Pandemonium Walks Upon the Scene  Pandemonium  06-16-12 09:02 
  Welcome!  Joan  06-16-12 09:09 
  ... and close on his heels, Devlin!  Devlin  06-16-12 09:13 
  Here it is! Here I am!  Miss White  06-16-12 09:14 
  Calm and collected...  Sarah Hastings  06-16-12 09:17 
  A little bit about me...  Joan  06-16-12 09:24 
  Pomegranate!!!  Miss White  06-16-12 09:38 
  Tasty and Comfy  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 09:40 
  For Coventina le Fay  Miss White  06-16-12 09:46 
  The King's Cousin Arrives  Peter of Dreux  06-16-12 09:49 
  RE: Pomegranate!!!  Jessie Dodd  06-16-12 09:50 
  RE: For Coventina le Fay  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 10:05 
  RE: For Coventina le Fay  Devlin  06-16-12 10:11 
  RE: For Coventina le Fay  Peter of Dreux  06-16-12 10:12 
  A Judge?  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 10:24 
  RE: A Judge?  Captain StarCastle  06-16-12 10:30 
  A beautiful union  Devlin  06-16-12 10:36 
  Course One:Historical Fiction  Sarah Hastings  06-16-12 10:51 
  Meddling with a Judge?  J Sprocket Stemwinder  06-16-12 11:16 
  RE: A beautiful union  Jessie Dodd  06-16-12 11:19 
  Finding Some Loyal Fans  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 11:20 
  Poms & Circumstances  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-16-12 11:35 
  COURSE ONE: ROMANCE  Devlin  06-16-12 11:49 
  Oooh Fairy Dust in Contemporary?  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-16-12 11:52 
  Inspiration and possible snackage.  Miss White  06-16-12 12:16 
  Settling In  Andrea Hawthorn  06-16-12 12:44 
  Course Two: Science-Fiction/Fan Fiction  Sarah Hastings  06-16-12 13:37 
  Love Voyager Style  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-16-12 15:07 
  RE: Settling In  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 15:08 
  Good vs. Evil  Sabrina Banner  06-16-12 15:21 
  COURSE TWO: HISTORICAL FICTION  Devlin  06-16-12 15:43 
  Two courses from each  Clio  06-16-12 15:51 
  RE: COURSE TWO: HISTORICAL FICTION  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 15:57 
  RE: Love Voyager and Aragon  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 16:04 
  Lesser Beigns  Uncle Sutekh  06-16-12 16:23 
  9 Hours In...  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-16-12 18:17 
  Quieter?  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-16-12 18:55 
  RE: Two courses from each  Jessie Dodd  06-16-12 19:39 
  Glitterbomb!  Miss White  06-16-12 19:54 
  Not something you see every century  Cervantes  06-16-12 20:22 
  COURSE THREE: HORROR  Devlin  06-16-12 21:18 
  The Horror is too Horrible!  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 21:51 
  Fans Go Crazy for Dev!!  Coventina le Fay  06-16-12 21:53 
  Course Three:Mythology  Sarah Hastings  06-16-12 23:34 
  COURSE FOUR: FANTASY  Devlin  06-17-12 01:30 
  What Happened So Far  Joan  06-17-12 02:48 
  COURSE FIVE: SCIENCE FICTION  Devlin  06-17-12 04:08 
  Course Four:"Anti" Romance  Sarah Hastings  06-17-12 04:09 
  DEVLIN: PLATING  Devlin  06-17-12 04:33 
  A doff of the cap  Devlin  06-17-12 04:36 
  I'll toot her horn  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-17-12 05:38 
  Excellent Competition!  Wyatt Earp  06-17-12 06:14 
  Goodness! and Cheers!  Miss White  06-17-12 06:51 
  Course Five: Mystery-Dedicated to Agatha Christie  Sarah Hastings  06-17-12 07:00 
  Plating  Sarah Hastings  06-17-12 07:06 
  How Exciting!  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-17-12 07:12 
  Refreshment? PLEASE!  Sarah Hastings  06-17-12 07:35 
  RE: Refreshment? PLEASE!  Miss White  06-17-12 07:54 
  Fun!  Kat Black  06-17-12 08:22 
  Astonishing!  Peter of Dreux  06-17-12 08:36 
  Wow  Clio  06-17-12 08:40 
  Well Done *salutes*  Captain StarCastle  06-17-12 09:12 
  Huzzah!  Andrea Hawthorn  06-17-12 13:29 
  Refreshments would be nice...  Jessie Dodd  06-17-12 15:15 
  And The Winner Is...  Katheryn dEllesmera  06-17-12 15:22 
  RE: And The Winner Is...  Sarah Hastings  06-17-12 15:31 
  Great jobs both of you!  Miss White  06-17-12 15:32 
  Congratulations to both competitors  Clio  06-17-12 15:58 
  Good Show!  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-17-12 16:55 
  RE: And The Winner is...  Coventina le Fay  06-17-12 17:10 
  Ooooh the next challenger!  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-17-12 19:36 
  Draw! For lack of a better place  Dr Armageddon Endikut  06-21-12 05:29 
  Ah my old foe  Estarfigam the Memphite  06-21-12 16:20 


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